tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post111828020655592891..comments2023-05-28T04:34:00.429-06:00Comments on Hawk Circle: Hellenic SedokaPatrick M. Tracyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14366666601869757080noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post-1118534616628062482005-06-11T18:03:00.000-06:002005-06-11T18:03:00.000-06:00Bill, All you get to take with you are your experi...Bill, <BR/><BR/>All you get to take with you are your experiences. I'd say that the best thing to do is to collect as many good experiences as possible before someone comes and shuts the lights out.<BR/><BR/>Ken,<BR/><BR/>I thought about the silver coins on the eyes when I read your "Death" poem. That lead me to the boatman, then the rest of the Greek iconography. It seemed to mesh well with the rhythm of the Sedoka form. Like the Haiku, the Sedoka seems very flexible.<BR/><BR/>Thanks to both of you for your comments.Patrick M. Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14366666601869757080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post-1118319142492051282005-06-09T06:12:00.000-06:002005-06-09T06:12:00.000-06:00Now this one, I think, ties perfectly to the last....Now this one, I think, ties perfectly to the last. As we make that final journey, what can we truly take from here? Memories if we're lucky, luckier still if those memories are of a life fulfilled not spent in attainment of material objects...Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07338910000372628114noreply@blogger.com