tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post112628832641952849..comments2023-05-28T04:34:00.429-06:00Comments on Hawk Circle: Sketched Out in BriefPatrick M. Tracyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14366666601869757080noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post-1126549776397573302005-09-12T12:29:00.000-06:002005-09-12T12:29:00.000-06:00Bill,There's an element in us that likes to have s...Bill,<BR/><BR/>There's an element in us that likes to have something more tangible to hold onto than just writing (code or otherwise). We like to have something hard and present to show for our work. That's not as common these days, though. <BR/><BR/>Thanks for your positive feedback on this one. I felt it really turned out pretty well. An "hourglass of life," as you called it.<BR/><BR/>Whit,<BR/><BR/>Thanks a lot for visiting. I've seen you over at Bill's site, and it's great of you to drop in and say nice things. I'll have to return the favor.<BR/><BR/>Soulless,<BR/><BR/>I guess I've been into the idea of time passing and what it means lately. I'm glad that I can take you with me on these journeys through the chronos with me, and that you get a kick out of them. Again, I'm always honored when you have such nice things to say.<BR/><BR/>Mush,<BR/><BR/>Unless something has the voltage to arc across the distance between us, unless there's something understandable and innately true, the work means nothing. <BR/><BR/>Thanks to you all once again. Your great thoughts and enthusiasm keeps me coming back when it would be easy to let things slide.Patrick M. Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14366666601869757080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post-1126482679378860632005-09-11T17:51:00.000-06:002005-09-11T17:51:00.000-06:00Whit sounds like me lol.It doesn't matter what you...Whit sounds like me lol.<BR/><BR/>It doesn't matter what your topic is, it seems we can all relate. That is an extra dimension to your gift :)Mushsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16135378384609982640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post-1126413304732748982005-09-10T22:35:00.000-06:002005-09-10T22:35:00.000-06:00Like your piece about the seasons, i.e. "Per Annum...Like your piece about the seasons, i.e. "Per Annum," this one takes me, enfolds me on a temporal ride. You have a way of weaving time into form with word-threads. And, in most of your poetry, I catch a feel of a bird's eye view -- and I then promptly revel. Gratefully, I might add. ^_^<BR/><BR/>I've enjoyed reading this, especially the third stanza...<BR/><BR/><I>barking<BR/>into morning for the sheer<BR/>company of it</I><BR/><BR/>Ahh, what insight! You spoil me with such soul-food. *grin* Thank you.S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post-1126395515342590652005-09-10T17:38:00.000-06:002005-09-10T17:38:00.000-06:00Wow. Saying anything else would seem pedantic afte...Wow. <BR/>Saying anything else would seem pedantic after reading through your illustrative prose.Whitneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12320162539030386649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post-1126364954586879432005-09-10T09:09:00.000-06:002005-09-10T09:09:00.000-06:00Firehawk - An excellent travel though the hourglas...Firehawk - An excellent travel though the hourglass of live... I find myself here:<BR/><BR/>"We, who have become part<BR/>of our fathers, "<BR/><BR/>I work, yet somehow I long for a time when the work would have been more 'manual' where producing tangible goods was the 'good job'. Where the sounds of hammers, wrenches, machines and such were the sounds of work, not the clicking of fingers on keyboards.<BR/><BR/>Nice piece, I may just print and keep this one!!Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07338910000372628114noreply@blogger.com