tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post5214877247184175866..comments2023-05-28T04:34:00.429-06:00Comments on Hawk Circle: The Settled Dust, Part EightPatrick M. Tracyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14366666601869757080noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post-68319412902791408842007-08-24T14:36:00.000-06:002007-08-24T14:36:00.000-06:00Doc,I'm glad you like it. This one's taken a bit ...Doc,<BR/><BR/>I'm glad you like it. This one's taken a bit of a turn on me. I didn't expect it to be quite as heavily involved with the relationship between these two characters, at least early on. Glad you like the ending haiku poetry. I think it turned out quite nicely, too.<BR/><BR/>Swiftboat,<BR/><BR/>Thanks. Glad you're still interested int it. More action's coming here in the next episode (I say that, having not one word written as of yet...)<BR/><BR/>Bobby,<BR/><BR/>Yes, that's a good thought. They need each other, even though they didn't know that before they met...Patrick M. Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14366666601869757080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post-20410883561988313582007-08-23T09:59:00.000-06:002007-08-23T09:59:00.000-06:00There seems to be a symbiosis of sorts developing ...There seems to be a symbiosis of sorts developing here. A metaphysical sub plot to set off the action. Very very captivating.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post-83816210510611195942007-08-21T19:46:00.000-06:002007-08-21T19:46:00.000-06:00Yes, I'm also intriged by the relationship develop...Yes, I'm also intriged by the relationship developing between Haike and Namira. I'm glad you decided to fill that out more. It's a nice addition to this series.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post-63731218991126360842007-08-20T20:52:00.000-06:002007-08-20T20:52:00.000-06:00Very intriguing! The relationship between the boy...Very intriguing! The relationship between the boy and the woman promisses to be more than one might expect. You are developing two very interesting personalities. The Haikus at the end are great, but the middle one seems particularly powerful, to me. Lovely word usage.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com