tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post5496183303636394767..comments2023-05-28T04:34:00.429-06:00Comments on Hawk Circle: In MiniaturePatrick M. Tracyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14366666601869757080noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post-64578880471270706122007-01-22T20:31:00.000-07:002007-01-22T20:31:00.000-07:00I like a couple of things about this poem. First o...I like a couple of things about this poem. First off, after several readings it retains its secrets. There's a lotta story there which this poem simply keeps to itself. Nice!<br />Second, this mild, gentle tone is quite seductive to the reader. It draws one onward.<br />Last, for such a short poem it has a lot of interesting sounds or noises in it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post-30431108748619936752007-01-17T15:37:00.000-07:002007-01-17T15:37:00.000-07:00Doc,
Glad you liked it.
MB,
Well, it seemed to...Doc,<br /><br />Glad you liked it.<br /><br />MB, <br /><br />Well, it seemed to call for short lines. I'll try whatever tactic seems interesting at the time. Glad you liked the compression of language here.<br /><br />Thanks for coming over!Patrick M. Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14366666601869757080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post-65301043274053041782007-01-17T11:13:00.000-07:002007-01-17T11:13:00.000-07:00A miniature poem, like a miniature painting, conta...A miniature poem, like a miniature painting, containing an amazing amount. The short lines are very effective.MBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14515233228776181123noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12005479.post-56171863982020727202007-01-12T09:23:00.000-07:002007-01-12T09:23:00.000-07:00enctneI am full,
the world
without and
within ...enctneI am full, <br /><br />the world<br /><br />without and<br /><br />within enough<br /><br />for living<br /><br />this small life.<br /><br />Lovely. So few words that say so much! A beautiful way to put things into a realistic perspective.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com